--chapter 4--
mama is here
"a meteor is aproching!" said the star. "we must land on it. this could be my birth comet!" the little girl and the star landed on the comet. and on the comet, was a big star. it was old, and it wasnt moving. "mama!" said the star."its mama!" the old star spoke."is..is that y-y-you?" "yes mama." said the star. "its me!" "i am to w-weak." said mama star. "i cannot be galax-galaxy qu-queen anymore. you must b-b-become king." "king?" said the star. "yes. your crown is this. here" she passed a gold, jeweled crown to the star. "and now as king," said the star."i make you." he pointed at the little girl."princess"
THE END
this story was inspired by mario galaxy.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
2 comments:
Hey Duncan - What an excellent story! Your vocabulary is fantastic for your age. If you don't create games when you're older, you can always write books!
This is clubpenguin163.
I got you on my blogroll
Post a Comment